Rater akashe na bola kobitara;
Hothat gohin swopno saradin
Asphuto sobdo nil kolome-
Jiboner ochena mor
Chineo Ochena-
Abchaya kotha koy
Bilombito se loy
Ahomika mistrito ishara
Morudyan naki Morichika?
Jhorna-se anonya
Nilporir bonya;
Godhulir santokhon eo
Choncholotar anukhon
Agunti proshno jay bhese jolosrote
Uttorer ashay mohonar digonte;
Ichegulo meghkalo
Churno kore bojropate!
Alek kalpona
Anonto bhabna-
Rater chaya, durgami dhurbotara-
Sakhhi sudhu mouno Arshira.
Really amazing blend of thought and melody,,with a background depicting real life feelings all rolled into one!!!Really Good....
ReplyDeleteFinally out with the blog!!...gud gud!! :D
ReplyDeleteand, really gud writeup...great poem to get started!!..Carry on!!
Onek kobir vaber majhe...koek chotro lekha
ReplyDeleteNotun abege vorie jibon gopon kichu kotha..
Se bole..
Nijer kotha bojhate chai..
Na bola kotha hoi ta jana..
Pilur kobitay.....
nice yaar!!!! finaly amar naam deoya kobita ta blog e elo!!
ReplyDeletebesh sundor.....likhe ja r.....theme jas na....
ReplyDeleteThnx all of u........:)
ReplyDeletereally amazing!!
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