Saturday, January 23, 2010
JIBAN
JIBAN— ektukro ei sobdota je kotota gobhir arthobahi ta ar bolar apekha rakhe na. Tobe somosto arthotai nirbhor kore amader dristibhongir upor. Tumi joto kothin kore ei sobdobishes ke dekhbe seo bibhishika hoye tomar samne hajir hobe— ar joto sohoj kore dekhbe totoi ‘joloboth torolong’. Ajanake joy korai bodhoy ei sobder mukhyo udesho. Gotanugotikotar jatrapothe ga bhasate er boddo aniha— tahole kemon jeno ekgheyemir jatakole sobkichu pishto mone hoy. Nutan angik,nutan drishtikon— tobei na romancher abogunthan unmochito hoye nutan kormopreronar alokborshe padarpon korbe gobhir jotne bona sopnorashi. Noile je bachatao jarer sathe tulonio. Tai bodhoy ajker paye pa miliye somudre jolokeli korar ananda bhobishoter pneumonia r bhoy e sonthrosto noy.
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lst lin ta darun likhechis re!!
ReplyDeletetobe tor kotanujai,jibon ki sotti gotanugotik pothe chole na??kojon somajer niom venge bachte pare bolto??r jodio ba pare,tobuo jibon ki sobsomoe sei pothe jete chae??bisesoto narijibon??kojon pare bolto gotanugotikotar sikol take venge berie muktir nissas nite???????
well said...especially last line ta....oi pneumonia hoar bhoy ta pai na bolei to sotti amra jol niye oto pran khule moja korte pari....khub afsos hoy eta bhebe je amader jiboner proti ta jinis keno amra ebhabe bhabte pari na.....asole amader jibon ta emon ekta kata tar diye ghire rakha je ekhane simana periye jete geley amra khoto bikhotto hye jabo....amader ei dukho ta keu konodin bujhbe na....chara goru hoar je khide ta mone mone boye berai seta bodhoy ei somudrer jole khela korar moto choto ghotona dye bhorate hoy.... :)...anyways...good write up....por por duto post eto bhalo hyeche je no words are enough...chaliye ja....
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ReplyDeletethnx 4 d commnt.tr qs onujayi amader lyf r onektai hoyeto amra gotanugotik bhabe chli...bt ekbar bhebe dekh to ete ki amra pran khule bachete pari?bachar anondote ke jeno amader hate paye beri bedhe dey....seta hoyeto beche thake hoy...kintu tate pran ta thake na......r narijibaner kotha bolchs se byapare bolte gele words kom pore jabe......tobuo short e blchi...ei somaj nari der chirodin podanoto krei rakhte cheyeche..kintu knodin jodi r keu kno protibad na kre sei gotanugotik pathe chlto bhebe dekh ajke bodhy thle amra ei jaygay darate partm na
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ReplyDeletethnx a lot....r 2i katatar r diye simanar sathe je tulona ta krechs....khub bhlo.....r tr bengali te lekha je eto bhlo...ebar tor blog e kono bengali lekha chai.......
SOHOJ ER THEKEO DRISHTIR SOCHCHOTA TA BESI BHABE KANKHITO... SOCHCHOTA THAKLE OJANAKEO BHED KORE DEKHA JAy karon nijer jukti buddhi tokhon sei sochcho drishti ke obolombon kore egote pare ...sei sochcho drishti atmonirbhor .. nijer proti ogadh astha bahi... ar sei drishti i pare gotanugotike o nijer mayanjon lipto kore durer onirdesswer obhisari hote nirbhik chitte...
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